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Topic: ITT: An idea for a Anime you would like to see become a reality.


grey started this discussion 7.7 years ago #253

Any thing your mind can conceive.

For me it would be that a guy, on a miserable futuristic earth, tries to commit suicide by jumping into a crater left from a missile/bomb and somehow instead finds a portal to a new, pure, and brilliant world at the bottom. He slowly one by one starts to bring his most trusted friends to this new world and starts to set up a small colony where him and his friends start to live a double life. Living normally on earth, and recording and documenting everything they see and do on this new planet in the name of SCIENCE! Over time, their bodies adapt the conditions of the new planet. The increased gravity makes their bones denser and their muscles are constantly being trained by the increased gravity so they get stronger and faster too. The higher quality air makes their breathing better somehow. Their immune systems becomes invincible and old scars start to heal.
I have no idea where I would go with this after that but I would so want to see this actualized in anime form.

Anonymous B joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 1 minute later[Top] #2,872

check your email grey
its kinda late for you to be up <3
-Lyev

Anonymous C joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 12 hours later, 12 hours after the original post[Top] #2,905

@previous

> -Lyev

How do you even pronounce that? What country are you from?

grey (OP) replied with this 7.7 years ago, 3 hours later, 15 hours after the original post[Top] #2,920

Come on guys! Lets get some Anime ideas in here! You know what, lets expand it to manga too. I know you guys have idea idea about it before.

Anonymous B replied with this 7.7 years ago, 11 hours later, 1 day after the original post[Top] #2,950

@2,905

> > -Lyev
>
> How do you even pronounce that? What country are you from?

Le-Ev
SOVIET RUSSIA
and to contribute, i'm a horny guy, so i'd just like some horny girls around me ;P

Anonymous E joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 1 hour later, 1 day after the original post[Top] #2,958

> I have no idea where I would go with this after that

Suggestion:

The colonists begin to realize that this world was once a major transfer hub for various interstellar civilizations. The builders of the network went extinct several billion years earlier, but some of the portals are still operational. Apparently, the recent Nuclear War opened a random portal between The Hub and planet Earth, allowing your protagonist and to come through.

Unfortunately, Paradise comes at a cost. The colonists make the mistake of trying to reactivate the long dormant Network. This alerts several non-humanoid cultures to The Hub's existence, all of whom want total control of the Network. One of them is an utterly hellish extra-dimensional species bent on the obliteration of all sentient life.

From the human viewpoint, they are totally insane and technologically capable of obliterating any race in the galaxy. If they seize control of the Hub, they will lay waste to every world they encounter. It will be genocide on an unimaginable scale.

Realizing he is directly responsible for unleashing this horror on the universe, your protagonist makes it his mission to unite all the remaining species against the common threat - but overcoming the natural xenophobia between human and non humanoid species seems practically impossible.

Plot points to consider:

1) Parallels to World War Two - armies of darkness rolling across Europe. Had the Nazis succeeded, they would have wiped out very last "Non Aryan" on the continent - and eventually have fought a war of extinction against with the rest of humanity.

2) Your protagonist's sense of responsibility would result in a complete change in personality - going from suicidal nihilist to a dedicated (and well-respected leader) leader. This would be a gradual but ultimately inevitable transformation.

3) The utter desperation of the approaching war: even with their newly advance physiology, humans are already on the verge of extinction (due to the Nuclear War) and have very little hope of surviving the conflict. The most they can do is forestall the inevitable - both for themselves and every other sentient species in the galaxy.

4) Given the hopelessness of the situation, your Protagonist is forced to consider a devastating final option: the complete destruction of The Hub. This would prevent The Enemy spreading through the cosmos - but it would also sign the death warrant of the human race, which cannot hope to survive on nuclear wasteland of the planet Earth.

5) The one glimmer of hope is provided by the Protagonist's girlfriend. Women think differently to men, viewing the world from an entirely different perspective. She sees one slim possibility for survival; but it may be their sole remaining option. Only question is, will anyone - even the Protagonist - be willing to consider her suggestion?

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Anonymous F joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 47 minutes later, 1 day after the original post[Top] #2,964

@previous

Maybe make it so that the villains are *actually* fighting for the survival of their race?

Anonymous G joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 30 minutes later, 1 day after the original post[Top] #2,966

@2,958

> 3) The utter desperation of the approaching war: even with their newly advance physiology, humans are already on >the verge of extinction (due to the Nuclear War) and have very little hope of surviving the conflict. The most they >can do is forestall the inevitable - both for themselves and every other sentient species in the galaxy.

Keep in mind the rest of earth does not know about it. (The new Planet and the kids working on it.)

Anonymous H joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 11 hours later, 1 day after the original post[Top] #2,996

@previous

> Keep in mind the rest of earth does not know about it. (The new Planet and the kids working on it.)

If they know hostile aliens are likely to invade the Earth, wouldn't they try to warn their people back home?

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 10 hours later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,014

@2,964

Grey's storyline; his call.

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 58 minutes later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,015

OK, here are some screencaps from an amateur cartoon I've been working on and off for a few years now. It's called Kagaya Hime Miho-chan, which means something like "Radiant Princess Miho". The storyline takes place in 1960s Japan, so I'm doing it in black & white, sort of like those old Astroboy cartoons of the early sixties.

Inspired by Mahou Tsukai Sally'', the storyline is pretty simple. Miho-chan''' is a princess of the '''Radiant Kingdom'''. Although only ten years old, she's an extremely powerful sorceress in her own right, powerful enough to defeat minor demons from the 'Shadow Realm. Bored with court-life in her parent's kingdom, she decides to run away to the "semi-mythical" planet Earth in search of excitement and friendship.

She ends up in the town of Miyamae, where she assumes the identity of a simple Tokyo school girl. Despite being slightly spoilt and haughty, she soon makes two close friends, a gabby tomboy and a sterotype pretty-girl. She also takes a liking to her kindly young homeroom teacher, Miss Yamada.

Unknown to everybody, Miho's presence on Earth has disrupted the "Great Boundary" between the various Realms, allowing demons and magical beings access to this World. Some of them are simple tricksters intent on mischief, but many are incredibly dangerous and hostile to humanity. King Erebus of the Shadow Realm is especially eager to conquer the planet and enslave humanity for his hellish domain.

As Miho-chan is the only genuine sorceress in the mortal realm, she is humanity's sole hope against these monstrous invaders - but will her magical powers be enough to defeat the demonic Erebus and his hellish minions?

BTW:' In case you're wondering why the screencaps are wondering why the screencaps are full of spanking scenes and panty-shots, ''panchira'' was an extremely common convention of 1960s anime (and my usual handle on this board is 'Lolicon Guy).

(Edited 9 minutes later.)

Anonymous I joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 56 minutes later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,017

@previous

Sounds cool. But the screen caps looks stupid as hell.

grey (OP) replied with this 7.7 years ago, 5 minutes later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,018

@3,014

Theres a lot more to it. It's something thats been in my head for a few years. I even drew a generic colony citizen in mspaint a year ago, but my artistic skills are that of Chris-chan's so I never showed anyone. >.<

Anonymous J joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 2 hours later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,030

The protagonist is a man named anonyma, during modern times. He is a scholar at a university that is becoming well-known for it's research on quantum teleportation. Anonyma reverse engineers the teleporters he stole with a team of anonymous, and create a pistol that can vaporize anything down into subatomic particles to be stored, and use those subatomic particles and reallign them into any other matter.

The story emphasizes his task of creating a utopic nation of anonymous, and his brutal conquering of a world with inferior technology.

Anonymous H replied with this 7.7 years ago, 7 hours later, 2 days after the original post[Top] #3,041

@3,017

Screencaps look pretty good 2 me. if I'd seen them posted somewhere else I would of thought they were from a real 60s anime.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 8 hours later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,048

@previous

Thanks. I was once temporarily banned from DA for posting them to my gallery. Some nut-job accused me of uploading 'stolen' screencaps and the mods actually took the complaint seriously.

Guess I must be doing something right.

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Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 7 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,049

@3,018

You should develop the idea further Grey, it's the basis for a great story. Doesn't even need to be anime-based; you could conceivably write it as a novel (allowing you to include more detail than in a visual medium).

Can you post more information about the colonists? I'm interested in knowing more about the main characters - personalities, capabilities, backgrounds etc.

Anonymous E triple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 24 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,050

@3,030

> The story emphasizes his task of creating a utopic nation of anonymous, and his brutal conquering of a world with inferior technology.

What his motivations for doing this? For example, is he attempting to bring down a corrupt system; is he a political vigilante avenging a personal loss; is he simply a lone anarchist who wishes to see the old world burn at his feet and a new one rise from the ashes?

Would the story end with the establishment of the Anonymous Utopia, or would it explore the outcome of his conquests in greater detail? Would an Anonymous Nation have any form of leadership or government; would anonyma be a ruling power or simply one of the nameless masses; how would people live under (what I assume is) a technocratic system?

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Anonymous E quadruple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 39 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,051

Here's an idea I had for a faux 1960s shoujo manga. I call it Tetsujo Aki-chan (Iron-Girl Aki).

Aki-12 is a prototype combat-droid with superhuman powers and shape-shifting abilities - sort of a cross between Astroboy and 8-man. In the far-off year of 2001, robots and androids are pretty common-place, but Aki is the first of her kind with near-human intelligence.

Anyway, due to some highly improbable' bureaucratic error, Aki-12 is delivered to 'Miyamae Elementary School, where she is inadvertently activated by a little girl named Keiko Misawa. The drone shape-shifts to become Keiko's exact double and an unbreakable bond is established between the two. Keiko adopts Aki-12 as her sister, allowing the droid to learn human emotions via close interaction with her "twin".

All of this takes place not a moment too soon, as Tokyo is about to be invaded by Giant Monsters' and 'Alien Menaces (which only Aki-chan can possibly defeat, of course).

Anonymous E quintuple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 17 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,052

@previous

Pencil sketch of Tetsujo Aki-chan' battling a colossal horned monstrocity. Despite mimicking '''Keiko's''' girlish personality, Aki's '''defence programs''' take over whenever a potentially lethal threat appears. In 'full combat mode, Aki can fly, generate force-fields, fire laser-beams from her hands and level entire buildings by brute force. Powered by a miniature "neutron reactor," she is fully capable of taking down opponents many times her size.

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Anonymous E just kept on posting this 7.7 years ago, 17 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,053

@previous

In common with old-school characters like Astroboy', '''Prince Planet''', and '''Gigantor''', Aki-12 spends most of her free time battling giant reptiles and alien robots (often leveling the city in the process). The rest of the time, however, she masquerades as '''Keiko's''' twin sister, attending Miyamae Elementary School and learning human behavior from the other children. The pretense is necessary, as her original creators - a sinister military agency known as 'Armaco - want their technology back at any cost.

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Anonymous E just kept on posting this 7.7 years ago, 29 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,054

@previous

OK, here's the "girlie" part of the storyline. Most shoujo'' manga of the 1960s contained light humor, along with a focus on love and friendship. Keiko''' and 'Aki are totally devoted to each other, the way twin sisters would be in an ideal cartoon world. Keiko recognizes Aki's naïveté and seeks to protect her from exploitation or cruelty (their classmates think Aki is a little slow, and often call her names. Being nearly human, Aki is capable of feeling sorrow and hurt).

Keiko's attempts to humanize her sibling often have disastrous consequences. For example, when she tries to teach Aki how to dance, the over-enthusiastic android ends up wreaking the living room - much to their parents' annoyance. Subsequently, Keiko often gets spanked for Aki's mistakes - a sort of running gag in the storyline.

NB:' Keiko's parents accepted Aki's presence in the family pretty much without comment. This is a common convention in many children's manga, such as '''Nobita's''' parents seeing nothing unusual about 'Doraemon hanging around their son 24 hours a day.

grey (OP) replied with this 7.7 years ago, 28 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,057

@3,049

Okay! I'll post it later ITT. Busy. Also:
> Grey
> grey
fix'D

Anonymous K joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 2 hours later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,072

@3,015

The story sounds so fucking epic but then every-fucking-thing is a grammie-pantie shot. wtf

Anonymous J replied with this 7.7 years ago, 4 hours later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,084

@3,050

He tells his peers that he is simply attacking the other countries for the lulz, but the story defines that he is a large anti-theist that plans on finding a way to end all religion.

The government system is a combination of anarchy and nationalistic dictatorship. Everyone in this utopia uses the transmutation technology in order to support themselves in a society without an economy. Anonyma is simply proclaimed as the savior of anonymity, and is seen as a mascot, rather than a leader. He has no real power over any of the anonymous, but he makes suggestions on diplomatic and military positions. Nationalism pushes the anonymous into a level hivemind.

Anonymous H replied with this 7.7 years ago, 5 hours later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,103

@3,072

panchira was very common in old japanese comics still is today

Anonymous I replied with this 7.7 years ago, 8 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,105

@previous

yeah but it ruins the plot. Fights scenes should be about a awesome badass fighter girl should be about a awesome badass fighter girl, not a awesome badass fighter girl's underwear.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 3 hours later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,121

@3,057

> Also:
> >Grey
> >grey
> fix'D

Sorry about that, Chief.

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 27 minutes later, 3 days after the original post[Top] #3,130

@3,084

Suggestion:

Perhaps you could plan it out as a trilogy.

Part One deals with the rise of anonyma, the conquest of society and the establishing of the Anonymous Nation.

Part Two details life in technotopia, the "Golden Age" of the Anonymous Nation and the coalescence of the Hivemind.

Part Three might describe the decline of technotopia as the Hivemind eventually begins to fragment into separate factions.

This final section could follow an older anonyma's desperate attempts to reunify anonymous and avert the potential chaos that would follow the collapse of the Hivemind.

The story might conclude with a "Hitchcock ending"; eg anonyma ultimately realizes that there can be only two possible outcomes to his Utopian dream: universal evolution'' or universal ''extinction. The saga closes with with an aged and exhausted anonyma wondering what tomorrow holds for the human species...

(Edited 6 minutes later.)

Anonymous E triple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 6 hours later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,137

This one's a parody of an old 1960s anime called Prince Planet'' (anyone here ever heard of it?). I call it Yuusei Shonen no kyohaku sekkou ''(Planet Boy of The Space Patrol). The main character is a Spock-like alien boy sent to study humanity and decide if the planet Earth should be admitted to the Galactic Union.

The storyline satirizes classic "Japanimation" cliches, particularly translation and continuity errors:

1. After arriving on Earth, he assumes a secret identity as a Tokyo schoolboy (totally unnecessary, because everyone knows who he is anyway).

2. Yuusei believes he is the ONLY alien on the planet, and is therefore constantly astonished when Tokyo is attacked by a Giant Alien Robot every other week.

3. Yuusei's loyal companions are Hiro and Keiko, a pair of Earth children. Despite being his closest friends, they meet him for the first time every five episodes.

4. Yuusei revealed his identity to Hiro in the first episode. Yet whenever Hiro advises him to change into Planet Boy, Yuusei replies in astonishment, "But HOW did you know?"

5. Keiko is always the first to see this week's Alien Menace. She immediately tells Yuusei and Hiro, but they never believe her no matter how many times she's been right before.

6. For some inexplicable reason, comic relief characters are never, EVER funny.

7. Yuusei constantly swears that he will never use his powers to take life, human or alien. He later uses them to incinerate a human criminal or destroy an alien warship, killing everything on board.

8. The series' recurring villain always wears a ridiculous disguise, but nobody ever recognizes him - even after he reveals himself.

9. Whenever a Giant Robot attacks, the ground shakes and Keiko falls over a cliff. This can happen anywhere in the world, but somehow it's always the same cliff.

10. The shape-shifting Zygons seem to invade the Earth every three episodes. The invasion always involves impersonating Yuusei's female'' classmates. Once they assume human form, Zygons can only be identified by a close physical examination. Strangely enough, the girls are ''always willing to strip down to their underpants in public while Yuusei examines them.

Anonymous E quadruple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 1 hour later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,141

@previous

Hiro'' checks a female classmate for signs of Zygon''' physiology with Yuusei's 'Z-scan' device. Even today, scenes like this are not considered inappropriate if they're drawn in a classic kiddie-style. Similar scenes can be found in '''Doraemon'''; a running gag is that '''Nobita''' often bursts in on 'Shizuka naked in the bath.

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Anonymous E quintuple-posted this 7.7 years ago, 26 minutes later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,142

@previous

Keiko's' underpants on view during a Zygon examination. An odd thing about sixties manga was that ''shoujo'' characters rarely felt embarrassment over their underwear being visible ('''Astroboy's''' sister '''Uran thought nothing of undressing in public, at least in the manga). The ''ecchi convention only really came into common practice during the 70s.

(guess I'm cheating a little here; "loli-pants" were usually depicted as plain white triangles during the 1960s; more detailed panchira [with lines and wrinkles] only started to appear around the 80s as fanservice became increasingly popular).

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grey (OP) replied with this 7.7 years ago, 2 hours later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,143

Ok. Its not everything but here's some more about this idea thing I've been thinking about for a few years.

Earth


Earth has gone under *nearly* apocalyptic war and Damaged but not destroyed. Earth still has operational governmental and educational systems, its all just a lot smalled due to there being a lot less people, citys, livable areas. Its not uncommon to see 800 foot deep craters from missles and bombs littered across the U.S.
Children have started going to school a full year earlier and are taught how to do more blue collar things than they are intellectual things. It is for this reason they are called the DIY generation. They are taught how program and maintenance computers. How to build radios. How to build and maintenance green energy sources like Solar panels and wind turbines. How to build homes and structures of all kinds. They are taught first aid and how to survive in the wild.
In other words they are taught how to live in a post-apocalyptic world. Its grim for them to know this. And even grimmer with the kind of people they are forced to live with, and they themselves are turning into. People are there are nasty, mean and wicked to each other. With most people, family means nothing, and "friends" are an antiquated thing of the past, replaced with gangs. Even the worst of crimes are rarely solved my police. They are just as much a gang as any other group. Bearly anybody makes any money except for weapon and drug runners. And the only time police chase after them it to steal their "goods" for themselves.

New Beginnings


Our protagonist, whose name I have NEVER been able to decide was one of the few lucky ones that had a real family and some alright friends. But his family, (mother, father and older bro) were taken from him in an accident where a gun runner crashed into their car while running away from the police. He was the only to survive the accident. After this he can can no longer connect with any one, especially his sparse friends. Six months later he throws himself off the edge of a crater.

The Planet


Its much bigger than earth, making the gravity a lot heaver. Its wide open and covered with grass. Everything has grass on it. The grass is probably the dominant specie on the planet. There seems to be a aura about the planet the inspires a sense of awe and joy in anyone on it. There is one large ocean and one or two large lakes. The landscape is hilly but the hills are not very tall and they are so wide and long that it seems like its just one giant continuous plain. (but seeing as how large and wide the hills are I guess they are just a big plain) There are very few mountains. Less than ten. Most are very small with the exception of one big circleal one that looks like a old meteor impact or a long dormant volcano.


Moar later.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 16 hours later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,203

@previous

Sounds very detailed grey. You said that the grass is probably the planet's dominant lifeform and that an aura of the sublime surrounds the world. Is it possible that the grass is somehow generating the aura, and may even be vast collective consciousness?

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Anonymous L joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 20 minutes later, 4 days after the original post[Top] #3,204

grey, I think your idea would make a nice feature film.

Lolicon Guy, you are incredible. Your work is amazing! Do you have anything completed, available for download?

grey (OP) replied with this 7.7 years ago, 3 hours later, 5 days after the original post[Top] #3,212

@previous

Why thank you!

Anonymous L replied with this 7.7 years ago, 15 minutes later, 5 days after the original post[Top] #3,215

@previous

> a guy, on a miserable futuristic earth, tries to commit suicide by jumping into a crater left from a missile/bomb and somehow instead finds a portal to a new, pure, and brilliant world at the bottom.

I think this is a most beautiful concept. I imagine a Lovely Bones style CGI/fantasy production...

Anonymous M joined in and replied with this 7.7 years ago, 3 hours later, 5 days after the original post[Top] #3,242

@previous

FF style CGI FUCK YEAH

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 9 hours later, 5 days after the original post[Top] #3,270

@3,204

Sorry, I've never completed an entire doujin; I've only ever drawn bits and pieces. As you've probably guessed, I have a lot of ideas, but I find it difficult to get past the first few pictures.

Thanks very much for the compliment, however. I'll continue posting my stuff to this thread.

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 1 hour later, 5 days after the original post[Top] #3,274

Mahou Tuskai Megumi-chan: this one is based on magic-girl anime of the early 1970s, (eg Mahou-no Mako-chan,'' ''Himitsu no Akko-chan'' ''Majokko Megu-chan'' etc). ''Mahou shojo series of the seventies tended to have teenaged heroines so I imagined a girl of around 15 as the main protagonist.

Plotline:
Megumi-chan is an orphan who was found sleeping in an open field at the center of a crop circle. A helpless infant of around four, her sole possession was a silver necklace with an unusual symbol engraved on a locket. Nobody notices at the time that the symbol is a miniature duplicate of the crop-circle.

Adopted by a kindly old Tokyo couple, Megumi grows up to be a wild and somewhat accident-prone teenager, often in trouble with her teachers for her disruptive behavior. In addition, her clothes have an inexplicable tendency to fall off when she becomes excited. The same thing happens to any girl in her immediate vicinity, leading to constant embarrassment for her classmates.

Things become more complicated shortly after her 15th birthday, when she suddenly develops mysterious powers, including flight, levitation, teleportation, transformation and practically anything else she can imagine. At first, Megumi is elated by her new-found abilities, but then begins to wonder where they came from.

It turns out that she is a Majokko'' (Magic-Girl) from the Radiant Kingdom''', one of six who were sent to Earth after a catastrophic invasion by the 'Shadow Realm. All six girls were members of the aristocracy, and each possess a locket inscribed with the seal of their line.

Megumi decides to locate the other five orphans and inform them of their royal heritage. Unknown to her, however, supernatural forces have already begun to bar her way. The Demonic king of the Shadow Realm has watched and waited ten years for the Signs of the Six, and has become aware of Megumi's existence. Intent on preserving his throne at all costs, he sends out his dark minions to track Megumi down and bring her back to him - dead or alive.

NB: As you may have guessed, this storyline ties in with the one presented in this earlier post:

@3,015

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Anonymous L replied with this 7.7 years ago, 7 hours later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,283

@3,270

I could flood with you with so many compliments that they would become meaningless! I will content myself with the pictures you post here.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 1 hour later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,286

Cover to a visual novel' I was working on a few years back. '''Kogaru Diaries''' was meant to tie in with the '''Radiant Kingdom''' storylines, introducing the five ''Majokkos'' that 'Megumi-chan was searching for.

Each princess is now living in a different part of Japan, attending middle school and just becoming aware of their magical powers. As their abilities begin to manifest, minor demons are sent from the Shadow Realm to dispatch them. It turns out, however, that the girls are more than a match for their enemies, despite their youth and inexperience.

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Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 16 minutes later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,287

Character profile for Shiko-chan, the demon-fighter of the group. Descended from a proud military aristocracy, she is a formidable opponent, combining paranormal abilities with superhuman martial skills. However, being raised on Earth by human parents, she experiences the same problems as any normal human teenager (eg, developing a major crush on a handsome college senior who turns out to be a lethal shape-shifting demon, etc).

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Anonymous I replied with this 7.7 years ago, 7 hours later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,295

stop making everthing a pantie shot. Either make a story or make a porno. dont do some shitty cocktease mix.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 7 hours later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,325

Pencil sketch for Yuko-chan', another character from '''Kogaru Diaries.''' Yuko is closest in line to the throne of the '''Radiant Kingdom, but ironically, she has no supernatural powers of her own. Instead, she has a magic talisman which transforms into a raging tiger whenever she is under threat. Most of the time, it looks like a stuffed animal (based on Hobbes from ''Calvin and Hobbes), but in its true form is fearsome enough to tear major demons limb from limb.

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Anonymous L replied with this 7.7 years ago, 9 minutes later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,326

@3,295

lol he's showing us the highlights!

Anonymous E replied with this 7.7 years ago, 2 hours later, 6 days after the original post[Top] #3,335

Yuko-chan' has her picture taken by a mischievous friend in '''Kogaru Diaries. As noted by various online sources, ''ecchi humor plays an important role in most forms of Japanese popular culture, particularly anime, manga and visual novels. Carefree scenes like this one often precede something more sinister, such as an impending attack by superhuman ninjas (or whatever).

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.7 years ago, 4 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,339

"Ominaesi:"''''' another scene from '''Kogaru Diaries. Saori and Kaori are non-identical twins living on the ouutskirts of Tokyo, the region where the city meets the country. Their classmates refer to them as ''Ominaesi after a certain wildflower common to the area. While the two are extremely close, their personalities are completely different; Kaori is bright, "genki" and adventurous, while Saori is shy, quiet and serious.

One day, Saori receives a strange book through the mail which only the girls can read; at first it appears to be a children's fantasy, but they soon realizes it is a genuine Book of Magic. As the girls study its contents, their supernatural abilities begin to develop - flight, levitation, teleportation, etc. Saori discovers she can summon the spirits of nature (especially trees and flowers), while Kaori finds she can control the weather (by invoking the heavens).

Naturally, Kaori revels in her new powers, but Saori takes her abilities far more seriously. She also wonders about The Book - where did it come from, who sent it to her, and why? She determines to solve the mystery by any means possible, and asks the Nature Spirits for advice.

The Spirits warn her not to delve into the Book's origins - tracing its original owner may be extremely dangerous, as there are many demons in the Shadow Realm who seek its power. Saori heeds their warnings and determines to live quietly in the countryside - but naturally, Kaori refuses to believe her sister and continues showing off with her magic.

Very soon, Kaori's antics attract the attention of King Erebus' of the '''Shadow Realm'''. He has been after The Book for years, and now he finally knows where it is. Only problem is, the girls are under the protection of 'The Nature Kingdom, and the spirits of Sky and Earth will not give them up without a fight. Summoning his most trusted demons, Erebus convenes a war council - and the stage is set for a major conflict between the forces of light and darkness.

RE: The Panty-cam: again, ecchi'' humor often plays an important role in ''mahou shoujo'' series, ''Popatan being a good example. In this case, the player may view the characters' underwear by using the "panty-cam" function. Adds nothing to the actual story, but fun to play around with.

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Anonymous E triple-posted this 7.6 years ago, 2 days later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,395

OK, for a change of pace, here's my idea for a slice-of-life schoolgirl comedy. I call it Hai, Genki Desu! which was a popular expression in Shibuya about 10 years ago.

The story is pretty simple; there are these two teenaged girls attending a school full of ninnies and perverts. Half of the teachers are senile dimwits, the other half are sex-crazed nutjobs. Most of the students are just as crazy; the only two who seem even moderately sane are the heroines of the story.

Apart from that, there's no real plotline; each chapter just revolves around the girls going from one misadventure to the next, often losing their clothes in the process.

Based on ecchi manga such as Harenchi Gakkuen'' and ''Maicching! Machiko-sensei.

(Edited 4 minutes later.)

Anonymous E quadruple-posted this 7.6 years ago, 3 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,396

@previous

Sorry, clicked the wrong button...

(Edited 44 seconds later.)

Anonymous E quintuple-posted this 7.6 years ago, 9 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,397

@3,395

Character sketches for Hai, Genki Desu! The way I imagined it, each chapter starts out with a couple of panty-shots to "whet the appetite," then becomes increasingly more risque as the story progresses. The action never crosses completely over into explicit hentai, although the girls sometimes find themselves naked before the story concludes.

Anonymous E just kept on posting this 7.6 years ago, 8 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,398

@previous

A Genki Desu! page I sketched out some years ago when I was actually teaching in Japan. In this one, the girls' class is taking a tour of a television studio and somehow end up contestants on a "Sukebe" game show. Mistaken for a pair of local starlets, the girls are asked to cross a catwalk (equipped with hidden fans to blow their skirts up)...

Anonymous E just kept on posting this 7.6 years ago, 8 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,399

@previous

...leading to the inevitable ecchi-scenes and panty-shots. Believe it or not, these kind of game shows were quite common in Japan back in the 90s. Tokyo used to be a voyeur's paradise before the moralfags gained a foothold in the Japanese parliament.

Anonymous I replied with this 7.6 years ago, 4 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,408

EVERYTHING IS A GRAMMIE PANTIE SHOT. WTF.
Why even have them wear skirts? Is there even a point to them doing so? If your going to do this just do it right and make a full blown hentai.

Anonymous F replied with this 7.6 years ago, 22 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,411

@previous

I'd like to see a hentai drawn by TG aswell. :3

Anonymous N joined in and replied with this 7.6 years ago, 10 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,415

Yume Nikki in anime form

Anonymous H replied with this 7.6 years ago, 13 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,433

@3,408

> If your going to do this just do it right and make a full blown hentai.

panchira is far more common than hentai. panchira has appeared in almost every genre of anime and manga. hentai is restricted mainly to pornographic media.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 6 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,434

@3,411

Sorry, dudes, but hentai's not really my thing. May seem odd, but hardcore pr0n has never really appealed to me.

Weird, huh?

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.6 years ago, 38 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,435

This is a cover design for a transgender-themed manga' I had in mind a while back. The idea was similar to '''Hai, Genki Desu!''' except that the main character is a boy who was infected by a 'Transsexual Virus - a rare disease capable of re-writing human DNA and changing males into females. Again, no deep and meaningful plotlines, the humor would simply revolve around the constant embarrassment the hero experiences adjusting to life as a female.

BTW: This one of the pics that got me perma-banned from DA. They really don't like panchira out there.

(Edited 3 minutes later.)

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 13 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,454

Do you have any plans to finish a story and release it?

grey (OP) replied with this 7.6 years ago, 15 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,494

@previous

Who are you talking to?

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 19 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,529

Screencaps from another flash animation I was working on last year. This project was called Ikusa no Yukai which means something like "The Phantom War."

This one's supposed to be a 1960s sex education cartoon for Japanese children (yes, they really did make sex-ed anime in Japan, seriously). The story is narrated by a kindly old doctor who explains the facts of life to a classroom full of fourth graders.

Naturally, the kids misunderstand everything he says, leading to various humorous situations (ie, thinly-veiled excuses to show a bunch of lolis running around in their underwear). Sort of like if Kodomo no Jikan had been made back in the late sixties.

Posted these at DeviantART' last year. Needless to say, the '''anti-scum''' bawwwwwed like 'faggots until the mods deleted half my fucking gallery.

(Edited 3 minutes later.)

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.6 years ago, 12 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,530

@previous

CG illustrations based on the screencaps posted above. Had this idea about making a virtual DVD which would include the "original" black & white series, "restored" color footage and several extras (such as a "making of" section and a couple of RP games).

Leave a message if I should post the larger versions of these pics.

(Edited 3 minutes later.)

Anonymous F replied with this 7.6 years ago, 1 hour later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,531

@3,529

> DeviantArt
Meh, that's asking for trouble.

Anonymous F double-posted this 7.6 years ago, 46 seconds later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,532

@3,434

A bit.
-Nega-

Anonymous O joined in and replied with this 7.6 years ago, 5 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,541

@3,529
> thinly-veiled excuses to show a bunch of lolis running around in their underwear)


get out. your not wanted here.

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 5 hours later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,556

@previous

moralfags are not wanted here

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 18 minutes later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,557

@3,541

This is an otaku board. Panchira is a substantial part of the otaku subculture. Maybe you're on the wrong board.

(Edited 2 minutes later.)

Anonymous E double-posted this 7.6 years ago, 1 minute later, 1 week after the original post[Top] #3,558

@3,556

> moralfags are not wanted here

This. Definitely.

Anonymous I replied with this 7.6 years ago, 1 day later, 2 weeks after the original post[Top] #3,607

@3,557

Yes. And I agree. I just want panchira on women. Not children. Thank you.

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 1 week later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,004

@previous

Again, it's a very'' common convention, dating back to the 1950s in manga and the early sixties in anime. As a general rule, it was never considered inappropriate to show ''shoujo'' characters in their underwear. A well-known example is Uran from ''Astroboy. She was often shown undressed in both the comic strip and the cartoon, but nobody ever objected to her being depicted in this way.

Perhaps you should raise your points on this thread:

http://otakutalk.org/topic/273

The topic is more relevant to what you're talking about.

Anonymous P joined in and replied with this 7.6 years ago, 1 hour later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,010

@previous

As a general rule, it was never considered inappropriate to show children nude (see goku in Dragonball, cherubins, or even the cooppertone girl). I blame this "naked childrens is sea pea" in the Americans. European comics don't seem to mind about nudity in the same way that US does.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pyr%C3%A9n%C3%A9e


Even the coppertone girl was censored.
> At the turn of the 21st century, Coppertone revised drawings of the Coppertone Girl so that they would be less revealing in an era of heightened sensitivity regarding [censored]. Some recent versions show only the girl’s lower back, as opposed to her buttocks or wearing a T-shirt, a hat, and holding a bottle of Coppertone while the puppy is shown pulling on her shirt.

Now they are aresting grandmas and parents for taking photos of their kids. http://reason.com/blog/2009/05/04/grandma-arrested-for-child-por
Even breastfeeding is not safe anymore http://tinyurl.com/y4vhska

Enjoy your freedom

Anonymous P double-posted this 7.6 years ago, 17 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,012

@previous

Anonymous P triple-posted this 7.6 years ago, 27 seconds later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,013

@previous

inb4 deleting images of classic art as illegal porn ¬_¬

(Edited 42 seconds later.)

Anonymous F replied with this 7.6 years ago, 37 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,016

@3,556

> moralfags are not wanted here

I guess I agree...

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 43 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,021

@3,607

I allow you to hold this view. Allow me to hold mine.

Anonymous O replied with this 7.6 years ago, 11 hours later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,058

@4,013
Okay. I get what your saying. But this is still a worksafe chan. If byethost finds this they will deletet OTK!

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 15 hours later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,131

@previous

Sorry, but I find that a little difficult to believe. If there was any real danger of that happening, grey would have removed the pictures already.

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 1 hour later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,132

@previous
I wish I found it more difficult to believe... These are bad times we live in.

Anonymous F replied with this 7.6 years ago, 3 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,133

@previous

Huh?

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 32 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,136

@previous

> >>If byethost finds this they will deletet OTK!

> >Sorry, but I find that a little difficult to believe.

> I wish I found it more difficult to believe... These are bad times we live in.

Do you get it now??

Anonymous F replied with this 7.6 years ago, 27 minutes later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,139

@previous

Ah, so I did get you right...

Anonymous L replied with this 7.6 years ago, 6 hours later, 3 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,142

@previous

C:

Anonymous E replied with this 7.6 years ago, 3 days later, 4 weeks after the original post[Top] #4,317

@3,051

Random panty-shot from Tetsujo Aki-chan.

grey (OP) replied with this 7.6 years ago, 2 days later, 1 month after the original post[Top] #4,458

IDK weather to delete these or not, the byethost worker drone's have downs. >.<:

Anonymous Q joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 10 months later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,913

itt: pedos and retard logic

Anonymous R joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 14 hours later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,922

@previous

> itt: pedos and retard logic

Deal with it. :3

grey !C.MxxuCiTo joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 7 hours later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,928

@9,913
lol

Anonymous U joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 3 days later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,978

(Citing a deleted or non-existent reply.)
> greys dox
where'd you get that shit from brah?

Unintentional Jackass !LASXURl1b6 joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 6 hours later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,979

@previous
I c wut you did thar :L

Back on topic, I wouldn't mind an anime where when someone falls asleep they enter an actual world where they are exactly who they want to be, and they have to live out the life they want in the time they have until they wake up, and ultimately it leads to the main character bringing the two worlds together in a sort of feel-good ending. Anyone know anything with this premise, because I don't feel like it's my idea.

Anonymous W joined in and replied with this 6.7 years ago, 4 hours later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,982

@9,913

> itt: pedos and retard logic

> >>>>/MC/

Anonymous U replied with this 6.7 years ago, 11 hours later, 11 months after the original post[Top] #9,983

@9,979
naw nigga i srs, it's in the formspring url

Anonymous Z-2 joined in and replied with this 6.6 years ago, 1 month later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,228

how about this idea i came up with
name fathers betratal
man named danny gets kidnapped and gets experamented on they give him a new drug and gives him superpowers to brake down atoms and change them into weapons he goes and trys to find the person who made the drug but finds out that it was his father and he has injected him self with the drug and plans to sell it to the terrarists they are an even match but the dad starts to get the upper hand it is reveled later in the fight that when ever he uses his powers it shortens his life span as he see's his dad let down his guard he changes a nere by piece of metal into a sword and stabs and kills him stopping his plan but dies from useing his powers to much.

Unintentional Jackass !LASXURl1b6 replied with this 6.6 years ago, 2 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,229

@previous
Wow, a bump in this thread that isn't by a spambot....

kurt joined in and replied with this 6.6 years ago, 4 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,230

a man named danny was kidnapped an was experimented on he was injected with a new type of drug and gave him superpowers(to deconsruct atoms and turn them into weapons) so he goes and trys to thing the people who injected the drug into him only to find out that it was his dad who has injected him self with the drug it is reveled that he plans to sell it to the terrarists so danny trys to stop him but is complitly out matched his dad explanse that your powers drain the life span of the person in control of them and that his life span has become to short for his body to continue on useing the powers but as dad drops his gaurd danny useing the last of his life to turn a nere by piece of metal into a sword and stabs and kills his dad stopping him but dies from over useing his powers

the name of the show is deep betralyal

tell me what you think 1 to 5 please

  !Tkun4nmzJI joined in and replied with this 6.6 years ago, 13 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,239

@previous
By what you posted I think it would be a short, maybe an Ova, not a series.

kurt replied with this 6.6 years ago, 2 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,241

i know why you say that and i 100% agree with you but look at naruto or bleach they have episodes with out a fight so for the unimportent parts i could wright that hes trying to finds leads to what this drug is and why he was injected with it eg. in the fight with his dad he could say te drug only works on select few and changes the rest i dont no turning them into monsters just ideas if you have any ideas on how i could inprove this story please post them i well read them and they would be a big help

Unintentional Jackass !LASXURl1b6 replied with this 6.6 years ago, 20 minutes later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,242

@previous
Are you syntax?

Anywho, I think to get that plot to work, it would only be good as a movie or OVA. Anything more would be too much on too little story. Also, it sounds very Wolverine x Evangelion, I'm not gonna lie. As a movie, it could be a 4. As a series, you could add in siblings and the mother and make it a family issue. The series could be a 4 too if it were fleshed out with more plot.

Also, what do people think of @9,979, yeah or nah?

kurt replied with this 6.6 years ago, 5 minutes later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,243

well thank you i know a few new ideas i will post when ive put them changes into them but thanks for the 4 its nice to no that its ok

kurt double-posted this 6.6 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,244

hello im back and ive got a better story plot it still has some of the other parts of the plot hope you like
the name of the show is deep betralyal


a young man named danny was having a night at home with his younger brother josh they were very close but one night while watching tv the got into an argument and josh stormd out. it had been 5 hours since they had the argument and he still wasnt back hes never does this so danny goes out looking for josh he trys all of joshes hiding places but carnt find him so he heads into the bad end of town the place were all the kidnappings have been happening and it hit him he must of been kidnapped he stars sprinting bringing a lot of unwanted atention to himself he starts looking in the back alleys untill he hits a dead end as hes turning he fells an almighty hit to the back of the head next thing he knows hes wakeing up strapted to a lab tabble he starts trying to get free untill he hears a familour voice but just cant place it he came out of the shadows with a hood over his face he starts talking "you no your lucky you will thank me one day" as he stuck a needle into me "you will just fells a pinch now hahaha" i dont no how he could find it funny what ever he gave me it was horribile my body felt like it was being pulled a part untill i finaly blacked out from the pain as he came to he finds himself back in his house he had no memory of what happened but felt as sick as a dog so danny went to get a drink of water but something strage happened as he started turning the tape when ever the water started to come out the tap it just dissapered and came back as little balls of metal and he stars to remember somthing when he was blacked out he heard a voice talking to him he said danny we have givin you the power to do things no one else can do but you will help me get what i want like it or not hahahaha i have great plans for you danny dont dissapoint me and he remembers that josh is still missing but as he starts trying to find him he finds clues of where he is but its leading to somthing a lot bigger but he discovered somthing he wasnt ment to and finds himself fighting of an assination he discovers the drug had givin him the power of breaking down atoms and changing them into weapons when he finaly finds his brother he is shockted to find him dead in a pool of his own blood and then he hears that same vioce as the masked tirent walks over he lifts his hood up danny is sickend by the site his dad covered in joshes blood and holding a knife danny putting almost all the pieces together asks why did he get injected with the drug and why he killed his own son wolf(dad) just laughts and smiles at him "he was a failed experiment but he did give us me some good data he was finaly good for somthing and the soul perpose i gave the drug to you is because you are going to help me sell lt to every last terrerist on the planit as danny goes after wolf he starts throwing knifes out of know where wolf tells danny he to has injected himself with the drug danny is completly out matched and fells like he is going to die wolf tells danny that by using his powers his life aspan has become so low and that his body is to weak to keep using his powers but as dannys sees wolf drop his guard he changes a near by piece of metal into a sword and stabs wolf killing him but as a price from using his powers to much is starting to die he draggs himself over to his dead brother and dies a piecefull death noing he has stoped the death of all the moden world


tell me what you think

Unintentional Jackass !LASXURl1b6 replied with this 6.6 years ago, 2 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,245

@previous

> hello im back and ive got a better story plot it still has some of the other parts of the plot hope you like
> the name of the show is deep betralyal
>
>
> a young man named danny was having a night at home with his younger brother Josh. They were very close but one night while watching tv they got into an argument and josh stormd out.
> It had been 5 hours since they had the argument and he still wasn't back. He'd never done this before, so Danny went out looking for him. He checks all of Josh's usual hiding places (He'd never done this before, though?) but couldn't find him, so he heads into the bad end of town; the place where all the kidnappings (what kidnappings?) have been happening, then it hit him.
> Josh must have been kidnapped! He starts sprinting and bringing a lot of unwanted attention to himself. He looks in back alleys until he finds himself at a dead end. As he's turning he receives (You don't feel a blow to the head if it knocks you out) an almighty hit to the back of the head.
> Next thing he knows, he wakes up strapped to a lab table. He starts trying to get free when he hears a familiar voice. He tries to remember whose it is, but just cant place it. A man comes out of the shadows with a hood over his face and starts talking "you know, you're lucky. You will thank me one day." then he stuck a needle into him (lol you changed to first person here) "you will just feel a pinch now hahaha" (poor wording) Danny didn't know how he could find it funny, as whatever he had been given was horrible. His body felt like it was being pulled apart for what felt like a long time, until he finaly blacked out from the pain.
> As he regained his consciousness, he (You switched back to third person) finds himself back in his house with no memory of what had happened to him. Still, though, he felt as sick as a dog, so he went to get a drink of water, but something strange happened. As he turned the tap, the water that came out began turning into balls of metal. This triggers a flashback, and Danny remembers that when he was blacked out he heard a voice talking to him. > "Danny," he said, "we have given you the power to do things no one else can do, but you will need to help me get what I want. I have great plans for you, Danny, so don't disappoint me." Danny then remembers that Josh is still missing, and as he starts looking for him again, he finds clues of where he could find him,

fixed that much for you, no more...

> but its leading to somthing a lot bigger but he discovered somthing he wasnt ment to and finds himself fighting of an assination he discovers the drug had givin him the power of breaking down atoms and changing them into weapons when he finaly finds his brother he is shockted to find him dead in a pool of his own blood and then he hears that same vioce as the masked tirent walks over he lifts his hood up danny is sickend by the site his dad covered in joshes blood and holding a knife danny putting almost all the pieces together asks why did he get injected with the drug and why he killed his own son wolf(dad) just laughts and smiles at him "he was a failed experiment but he did give us me some good data he was finaly good for somthing and the soul perpose i gave the drug to you is because you are going to help me sell lt to every last terrerist on the planit as danny goes after wolf he starts throwing knifes out of know where wolf tells danny he to has injected himself with the drug danny is completly out matched and fells like he is going to die wolf tells danny that by using his powers his life aspan has become so low and that his body is to weak to keep using his powers but as dannys sees wolf drop his guard he changes a near by piece of metal into a sword and stabs wolf killing him but as a price from using his powers to much is starting to die he draggs himself over to his dead brother and dies a piecefull death noing he has stoped the death of all the moden world
>
>
> tell me what you think

Too fanfic...y.

kurt replied with this 6.6 years ago, 34 minutes later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,246

ok thank u that helps a lot and that i rote up in like 5 min i really dont care about gramer it just gets on my nerves

grey !C.MxxuCiTo replied with this 6.6 years ago, 9 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,249

I can see that as an OVA.

kurt replied with this 6.6 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,250

thank you

kurt double-posted this 6.6 years ago, 10 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,252

Anonymous Z-2

ok why are u copy my story thats just dog

kurt triple-posted this 6.6 years ago, 1 day later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,256

has anyone got more ideas twists any thing just to get the story as best i can if you dont like a serten bit tell me if u dont like the power share on what power u think he should have all of these things help so post and help make a good story for everyone

kurt quadruple-posted this 6.6 years ago, 1 day later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,260

ok for my charactar in my anime im not sure about the powers and how he discovers he has them should it be well hes fighting an assasin or some way eles should he be abale to contral the atoms around him and make them do his bidding should he be abale to control the iron in his blood and make his skin super strong or to the dentsaty of iron making out he has super stregth should he be abale to take the souls of the people around him and make himself stronger can he trasform technolagy you no like 100 mechanical parts to make a robot maybe in one part he turns a bunch of computers into a massive robot monster thingy like from trasformers 2 or to take the life force of the people around him and turn it into a bomb for the last part when he is fighting the big boss maybe he has stored the life force of some of the people he has killed and makes a bomb or useing his life force he turns him self into a bomb and kills the boss and himself
P.S dont care if i have spelt most of it wrong

kurt quintuple-posted this 6.6 years ago, 22 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,272

hey back with a whole new story enjoye it if you can

show name world beyond


a long time ago a group of scientist made a machine that could make a hole into a different dimension. the idea was to see if there was other life form not in space but in a different dimension they called the new world D.E1 they sent a team into the new world to try and find a new race but they forgot 1 thing not what we would do when we found them but what they would do when they found us!!! they all started jumping through the hole and into are world killing and eating anyone they could get there hands on not even the army could stand up to them the monster spread all over the world killing most of us in just under a month the ones that did live were ever hunted down and eaten or forced to hide like an animal ever way we were going to die.

as you can tell the storys about an invasion
the main people are a family who did live through the invasion and has gone into hiding
i wrote it like this becouse i wanted it to sound like the dad was telling the story of why they are hiding
this story is based in the future so when i say a long time ago i mean like in the year 2018 not like 1872 k just to clear up any comfusion

Anonymous S replied with this 6.5 years ago, 3 days later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,322

@previous
But what about salvation, whos the hero?

Anonymous Z-5 joined in and replied with this 6.5 years ago, 3 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,325

A man finds a winning lottery ticket.
He goes out and has the best night of his life.
In the morning, he finds out the ticket had expired years ago, and promptly kills himself by jumping off of a building.
In the time between jump and impact his mind races and he goes over every decision he made during his life.
He ends up dying happy with his life.

kurt joined in and replied with this 6.5 years ago, 3 days later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,350

u no i could see that and to the other guy the people all the savivers come together and close off D.E1 the reason i didnt nright that was i wanted u to tell me what should happen

. !NzLASIJfYM joined in and replied with this 6.5 years ago, 9 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,352

@previous
...not sure if syntax/wtf? or just spam...

grey !C.MxxuCiTo replied with this 6.5 years ago, 9 hours later, 1.1 year after the original post[Top] #10,360

> Syntax comes on at the same time Matt does. Hmm... -Ltamake
lol'd

Anonymous Z-8 joined in and replied with this 6.4 years ago, 1 month later, 1.3 year after the original post[Top] #10,804

hello if you are a fan of yugioh but dont want to download online to play people from around the world have no worries ive got a top tip go over to dueling network you can play for free no downloads you just have to register

  !Tkun4nmzJI replied with this 6.4 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.3 year after the original post[Top] #10,805

@previous
I wonder if it was just coincidence or these spambots are really looking for context...

grey !C.MxxuCiTo replied with this 6.4 years ago, 9 hours later, 1.3 year after the original post[Top] #10,808

@10,804
Lol oh god so much fail.

Anonymous Z-10 joined in and replied with this 6.3 years ago, 2 weeks later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #10,987

why do the bots alway hit this topic?

Mod joined in and replied with this 6.3 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #10,988

@previous
I guess they just go for topics with a lot of posts.

Anonymous Z-12 joined in and replied with this 6.3 years ago, 8 hours later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #10,989

@previous
But that's implying that there are spambots like this written directly for (AT|Tiny)BBS boards.

They just abuse forms.

  !Tkun4nmzJI replied with this 6.3 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #10,997

@previous
Maybe it doesn't diferentiate from topics from replies so the chances of it reply to a topic with many replies is higher

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 6.3 years ago, 1 day later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,000

@10,989
> pissblaster
if it fell into the wrong hands...

vocalon joined in and replied with this 6.2 years ago, 3 weeks later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,291

(Citing a deleted or non-existent reply.)
oh <insert deity here> why

Mod replied with this 6.2 years ago, 22 minutes later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,292

@previous
Done! SPAMMER banned in the name of Haruhi!

(Edited 12 minutes later.)

vocalon replied with this 6.2 years ago, 14 minutes later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,293

@previous
Why don't you guys delete the spam?

Mod replied with this 6.2 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,299

@previous
If you want it that way...

LASIchan(notrip) replied with this 6.2 years ago, 4 minutes later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,300

@previous
> edited the whole thing to say porn repeatedly with a few easter eggs thrown in.
> post does not exist

Mod replied with this 6.2 years ago, 20 hours later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,330

@previous
Usually I remove most links and leave the funny text behind but there were a request for deleting the whole thing...

vocalon replied with this 6.2 years ago, 1 hour later, 1.4 year after the original post[Top] #11,333

@11,299
Nah, I was just asking why.

Not an request, just got an answer here.

askabnaraw joined in and replied with this 6 years ago, 2 months later, 1.7 year after the original post[Top] #11,805

MOD ANTI-SPAM SLASH!!!

(Edited 5 minutes later by a moderator.)

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 6 years ago, 11 hours later, 1.7 year after the original post[Top] #11,806

@previous
OTK: home of the ninja mod

Anonymous Z-17 joined in and replied with this 5.1 years ago, 10 months later, 2.6 years after the original post[Top] #12,752

So there's this generic Mary Sue character, right? Literally a teenage girl with black hair, a traumatic backstory, and boobs bigger than her head.

She lives in a dystopian cyberpunk future where the air is poisonous to breathe, exposure to it for more than 15 hours will cause respiration problems, and will make you frail, and eats away at your skin after 8 hours. Given this popularity, gas masks have become IMMENSELY common. It's become commonplace to have a gasmask on and decorating them to show off. Their homes are built with air processing tools and filter it out of the air inside.

Rumors of a vaccine being developed spread around, but anyone who actually knows anything about it refuse to talk about it, and those who do mysteriously disappear, and are never heard from again.

Anyways, after discussing the vaccine with her Chemistry teacher, she leaves as school gets out. As she puts her gas mask on (about half way, so the filters don't have an effect) she remembers she left something in the teacher's room and she returns to get it, to find the teacher being abducted by a man in a horned gas mask. The horns are long and pointy, like a capricorn's and they're dressed in a thicker layer of protective dress. The man in the mask uses a gas attack to render her and the teacher unconscious.

That's all I've really got, other than there are multiple people with horned masks, the head of the big gas mask company is hiring the people in the horned masks to smother the vaccine group, and the girl dies.

(Edited 13 seconds later.)

Anonymous Z-17 double-posted this 5.1 years ago, 8 minutes later, 2.6 years after the original post[Top] #12,753

The people with horned masks look something like this.

The horns differ from person to person. I'm thinking about matching some of them up with certain Homestuck characters, but I feel like that'd be a little stupid and I might get in trouble for it.

Anonymous Z-17 triple-posted this 5.1 years ago, 3 minutes later, 2.6 years after the original post[Top] #12,754

Also actual spoilers: The head of the company's object of desire is victim of the air eating away at her flesh. Her gas mask and formal attire cover any scars though.

(Edited 26 seconds later.)

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 5.1 years ago, 1 day later, 2.6 years after the original post[Top] #12,759

@12,752
This sounds interesting. Have you roughed anything out yet?

vocalon replied with this 5.1 years ago, 5 minutes later, 2.6 years after the original post[Top] #12,761

@previous
Not yet, I'm still throwing stuff together.

vocalon !!7b7636024 joined in and replied with this 5 years ago, 1 month later, 2.7 years after the original post[Top] #12,812

Chemistry teacher, in lab coat.

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 5 years ago, 1 hour later, 2.7 years after the original post[Top] #12,813

@previous
not even a biology teacher

Anonymous Z-19 joined in and replied with this 5 years ago, 1 day later, 2.7 years after the original post[Top] #12,816

@12,752
what is a capricon

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 5 years ago, 1 day later, 2.7 years after the original post[Top] #12,817

@previous
a zodiac sign

aciptCaplab joined in and replied with this 4.1 years ago, 10 months later, 3.5 years after the original post[Top] #13,065

FUCK
OFF
YOU
GOD
DAMN
FUCKING
173.208.159.251
CUNTBOTS

(Edited 1 hour later by a moderator.)

ntzwzuCR joined in and replied with this 4.1 years ago, 6 days later, 3.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,124

> rumfart.dk
> fartsack
> same dif

(Edited 1 day later by a moderator.)

aciptCaplab joined in and replied with this 4.1 years ago, 15 hours later, 3.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,128

> [url=http://www.autismuskongress.de/]
> [url=http://www.autismuskongress.de/]
> http://www.autismuskongress.de/
> AUTISM US CONGRESS
Suddenly, I understand why politicians are the way they are. Thanks for the enlightenment, spambot. You're still fucking shitlisted though.

(Edited 14 hours later by a moderator.)

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 4.1 years ago, 14 hours later, 3.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,133

> mfw half the thread is 4 spambots samefagging anyway

. !NzLASIJfYM double-posted this 4.1 years ago, 2 weeks later, 3.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,174

goddamnit.

. !NzLASIJfYM triple-posted this 3.3 years ago, 8 months later, 4.3 years after the original post[Top] #13,512

> 3 new posts
> click thread
> last post is me 8 months ago
> I had no idea the mods still came here

I <3 my mods

(Edited 35 seconds later.)

vocalon joined in and replied with this 3.2 years ago, 1 month later, 4.5 years after the original post[Top] #13,565

@12,752

in hindsight, this is still a really neat idea, i'm glad i archived it here.

  !Tkun4nmzJI replied with this 3.2 years ago, 12 minutes later, 4.5 years after the original post[Top] #13,570

@previous

Wait a moment? The air is so toxic that it eats your skin in 8 hours but only cause some respiratory problems with 8 hours of exposition?

vocalon replied with this 3.2 years ago, 2 minutes later, 4.5 years after the original post[Top] #13,571

@previous

shrugs. i think i was writing it all out on the fly. plus it was like 2 years ago lmao

vocalon double-posted this 3.2 years ago, 24 minutes later, 4.5 years after the original post[Top] #13,572

the good news is i've improved as an artist so if i DO do anything with this it'll be tolerable

Anonymous Z-76 joined in and replied with this 2.3 years ago, 10 months later, 5.4 years after the original post[Top] #13,834

wtf happened to my reply?.....

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 2.3 years ago, 18 hours later, 5.4 years after the original post[Top] #13,836

@previous
??

Anonymous Z-76 replied with this 2.3 years ago, 2 days later, 5.4 years after the original post[Top] #13,838

. !NzLASIJfYM replied with this 2.3 years ago, 4 hours later, 5.4 years after the original post[Top] #13,839

@previous
Huh. Did you get a welcome notice after it disappeared?

Anonymous Z-77 joined in and replied with this 2.3 years ago, 1 week later, 5.4 years after the original post[Top] #13,846

i don't remember getting one

Thomasgup joined in and replied with this 2.1 years ago, 2 months later, 5.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,898

My partner and I stumbled over here from a different page and thought I might check things out. I like what I see so now i'm following you. Look forward to checking out your web page again.

Anonymous Z-79 joined in and replied with this 2.1 years ago, 19 hours later, 5.6 years after the original post[Top] #13,904

@previous
that's great
:
:3
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